pick a path adventere

WALT make a pick-a-path story.
WALT write interesting sentences by adding detail.
WALT use Google Slides in different ways.

We created this using Google Slides.
You need to open the slides so you can choose you own adventure!


reflection. what i did good is the pictures  what was hard it was the collaring
next time i can do beater pictures
how good was the pick a path story

My Family Publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My Family

My dad is called Tyler and he is a fisherman.   He grew up in Auckland.  My dad used to work at the Ramada. 

My mum’s name is Sheree.  My mum works at the Ramada.  She  used to to Auckland.In my family there are 5 people and 5 pets.

My big brother’s name is Vincent. He is 9 years old and he loves puppies.

My little little brother’s name is Credence. He is 2 years old.  He loves monster trucks and he goes to Kohanga.

My dog is a very bad dog because he scratches stuff.  My pet dog is called Papyrus. 
He likes playing with balls.

I love my family.


Reflection:
Two things I think I did really well were putting my keywords into sentences and that I had a lot of ideas for my mindmap.
Next time I need to work on putting my ideas into paragraphs which only talk about one person.