Creating Complex sentence

WALT use conjunction to create complex sentences

we created this to show the complex sentence we worked on with our buddy and to show off our 

this is my  Favourite   because it catches the fly.

WALT 
Use descriptive words 



The Grey  elephant is eating happily  

My Family Publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My Family

My dad is called Tyler and he is a fisherman.   He grew up in Auckland.  My dad used to work at the Ramada. 

My mum’s name is Sheree.  My mum works at the Ramada.  She  used to to Auckland.In my family there are 5 people and 5 pets.

My big brother’s name is Vincent. He is 9 years old and he loves puppies.

My little little brother’s name is Credence. He is 2 years old.  He loves monster trucks and he goes to Kohanga.

My dog is a very bad dog because he scratches stuff.  My pet dog is called Papyrus. 
He likes playing with balls.

I love my family.


Reflection:
Two things I think I did really well were putting my keywords into sentences and that I had a lot of ideas for my mindmap.
Next time I need to work on putting my ideas into paragraphs which only talk about one person.

the owl has a sharp beck it is holding a piece of mail it has feathers they are soft he has sharp nails it sharp it can scrach it has flufy ears.

Can I Please Have A Burger ?

I want a burger  because it is yummy. I've been good at school so I deserve a burger. I've been good
at home all the time so I deserve a burger. It is not fair that my mum and dad get food its not
fair that I  cant have any. Can we get burgers tonight?

mr sedcole plaground

                                                                                                               Tuatara Class
                                                                                                               Mangonui School
                                                                                                               09 August 2018
Dear Mr Sedcole,

Please let us on the big kids play ground because we can't explore enough at the little kids playground.
It's not fun enough - it's  too little for us. So please let the Y3s back on the big kids playground.

Sincerely

Joevarn

Haiku....Camping

I enjoy camping
I go with my family
We stay warm with rugs